Monday, June 3, 2013

Nephilim Born .....WIP

Tuesday Tales word prompt this week is: Train. I have taken an excerpt from my WIP: Nephilim Born which is the beginning of Sabrina's story. I hope you enjoy and please return to Tuesday Tales to read the work of other great authors.


My world is sometimes dark, but it justifies the light!


Monday Sabrina skipped school.  She was able to follow Steine and his wife without them noticing her on the buses and train.  His office building was highly guarded. Cameras were everywhere. Sabrina walked next to a woman with similar features as her and swiped her building pass from her purse. She was so fast the woman didn’t even realize it until she got to where the guard was and started rummaging through her bag. It ended with her using her cell to call home asking someone if she had left it on the kitchen counter.

Sabrina followed Steine into the building. He went into an elevator on the north side of the building to the 19th floor. She took the ride up.  He didn’t even realize who she was. Just goes to show how much he paid attention to Stephanie’s friends. Although Sabrina did look very different; she had gone to the store on Sunday and bought a professional looking outfit to wear so she could blend instead of her normal jeans, shirt and sneakers.

Sabrina was sizing up her prey. He was about 6’, thick brown hair and brown eyes. His build was kind of frumpy for his age. You could tell he didn’t work out much. She wasn’t worried about that anyway.  She knew she could take him--after all her combat trainer was a 7’2” Angel.   

As the elevator rode up people got off on their designated levels. She decided it was a good opportunity to focus on Steine’s mind. He was thinking normal mind junk of what he was doing today and how his stomach was upset and he’d have to take an antacid. Then he started thinking of what he did with Stephanie the night before. He grinned and Sabrina was looking at him trying not to rip him a part in front of everyone. He closed his eyes and began to think of what he wanted to do with Stephanie this evening while her mother was at the gym. He was going to Tiffany’s at lunch to buy Stephanie a bracelet.
Sabrina’s blood began to boil. What a scumbag this guy was. How could he do this to his daughter?


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  1. Ooooh...dark. He is a scumbag...I hope she really made him suffer.

  2. Uhh ... the last sentence was surprise ... Wonder what she'll do to him.

  3. I`m with Sarah, I hope she made him suffer.

  4. wow. This is intriguing. Can't wait to see where it's going.

  5. I like where this is going.I can't wait to see what happens next week.

  6. He deserves to die considering what Sabrina heard in his mind in the last sentence

  7. How horrible, i hope she takes him out painfully, swiftly, and very soon.

  8. OMG! What a nasty surprise at the end. Get him Sabrina. Scumbag lowlife!! Great story, though. You had me guessing.

  9. I don't think Steine is getting off that elevator. I hope Sabrina takes care of the lowlife right there. Grr...


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